Cathy’s Rules of Writing by Catherine Burr
No more than two “ly” words per page.
At least two metaphors/similes per page.
Each paragraph on page should start with new word. (Don’t use same word to start a sentence).
Do not use same word to start each Chapter.
Try not to use ellipsis . (they don’t format well with digital books).
Try not to use – (dashes) ditto.
Don’t leave paragraph with “widow orphan” words (don’t format well with print books).
Remember to use All Senses: SIGHT SMELL TOUCH TASTE SOUND.
Double check for correct version of word usage. i.e. “Past” is – time reference. “In the past.”) “Passed” is physical reference (I went passed him).
Try not to use too many He said, She said’s. Let dialogue to the talking. The reader should know who is talking without being told. Use descriptive so reader knows who is talking. Instead of saying, “Wait, Jane said.” Say, “Jane ran to the bustop yelling, “Wait!”
Double check word usage: i.e. there or their, taught or taut.
For novel and fiction writing, use contractions. i.e. “Don’t as opposed to “Do not”
Be consistent in set up. Don’t say. “Someone said.” Who is “someone?” Describe WHO you are talking about.
Always remember the simple WHO WHAT WHEN and WHY when writing your story
Every single character needs conflict. Write out on a note card (index card), one card, or piece of paper for each character; write what their internal and external conflicts are. Make sure when writing you refer to this so the conflict is addressed and by the end of the story, resolved. Knowing what the conflicts are helps to move the story along and helps steer the story into resolution.
About mid-way to ž through the story, there should be a story arc. This is when the characters or story has a breakthrough or turning point. This may even occur at end of story.
Watch and study old movies. With a note pad handy, write down each character’s name, attributes, what is their internal and external conflict. How are the conflicts resolved by the end? Where and what was the story arc? A good movie to do this is “Breakfast at Tiffany’s.” The characters are minimal yet profound in their conflicts.
Writing is like creating a painting. Done in layers. The first layer you might write quickly let your thoughts get down on paper. This would probably be done in narration mode. This might be your first draft. Second draft might be when you go back and turn the narration into dialogue. Dialogue is what brings writing alive. Your third draft might be where you go back through entire ms and add similes and metaphors. Add descriptives. With the first or second draft you might just write, “Jane’s eyes,” or “Jane’s blue eyes.” But going back and adding descriptives is important. When writing first draft, don’t stall or get hung up on descriptives or similes. Sometimes they are hard to think of straight up. Get the story down first. Then go back and be specific with descriptives, i.e. “Jane’s eyes were as blue as a summer day.” Or “Jane’s hair was as black as a moonless night.”
If you are unsure of similes and metaphors, Google them!
Catherine Burr has published over twenty authors and 80+ titles through her publishing company, is the author of 3 published novels, 4 non-fiction books, 2 parenting humor books, short stories, syndicated columnist, contributing charity author, and has been content and story editor for numerous titles. Her books have appeared on many best seller lists including, An Inconvenient Attorney, that spent over 52 weeks on the Amazon.com Best Seller List in the Family and Marriage category.